Thursday, January 23, 2014

Coconut Palm Poem

El Sol has risen over the near ridge, 
Silhouetting coconut palms 
That each look like a
Lime-colored explosion or 
Stop-motion firework.
Look at it long enough, and
it all starts to shimmy-shake

Stiletto fronds
Swoon at the top 
Of an improbably
Long and slender trunk,
And shiver reflections
Of the morning sun,

Every single palm,
In all its three sixty glory,
Giving a personal shout out
To distinguish itself
From the crumpled quilt of 
Other, more subtle greenery,

And only then
Do you think of the nut. 

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

... but only if you are not hungry or thirsty.

Beautifully written. Are your poems published anywhere?

BTW, how do you handle money there? Currency exchange? ATMs? Banks? Barter?

NoseyRosie

The Last Quarter said...

Very perceptive addendum, Rosie; I hadn't thought of that. Thanks

Thanks for the compliment. No, my poems are not published in print anywhere, just at http://poemsonmortality.blogspot.mx/

There are no banks or ATMs here, so unless we want to go to Puerto Vallarta we need to get by on what we bring. There was a guy who had a currency exchange but he became to ill to keep it up.
Tom